Mr. Darcy Takes A Wife, by Linda Berdoll
May. 20th, 2007 08:07 pm465 pages (trade paperback)
Genre: Fiction/Historical/Romance
Normally I disapprove of sequels written by people other than the original author, but when I went to the library to pick up the Keira Knightley version of Pride and Prejudice, I saw this on the shelf and checked it out on a whim. The book has a lot of issues--big issues, which in normal circumstances would never let me finish reading. However, Berdoll's excellent characterization and my mood for fluff saved it.
So let me talk about the cons first. The POV is omniscient, allowing for a convulted plot and numerous irritating time jumps between scenes--some flashbacks, some flash-forwards, and some flash-I-don't-know-where. Berdoll tries for a grand epic story complete with elaborate purple prose. I can only assume that she was trying to imitate Austen's style, which I found rather long-winded in the first place. After a few hundred pages the prose became semi-invisible, miraculously. I was then able to concentrate on Berdoll's only writing strength: characters.
Truly, the sole reason I finished and actually like this book is characterization. Although the characters belong to Austen, Berdoll develops them further and vividly, especially secondary characters like Wickham and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Even with clumsy exposition-style internal monologue, by the last page I felt reluctant sympathy for all the characters, including Wickham (who is the main antagonist). And, of course, I adored Darcy and Elizabeth--the book is a traditional romance in that respect. I have, in fact, placed the sequel to the sequel (Darcy & Elizabeth) on the top of my to-read list. I guess it's too much to hope that Berdoll will have fixed her prose, though.
Genre: Fiction/Historical/Romance
Normally I disapprove of sequels written by people other than the original author, but when I went to the library to pick up the Keira Knightley version of Pride and Prejudice, I saw this on the shelf and checked it out on a whim. The book has a lot of issues--big issues, which in normal circumstances would never let me finish reading. However, Berdoll's excellent characterization and my mood for fluff saved it.
So let me talk about the cons first. The POV is omniscient, allowing for a convulted plot and numerous irritating time jumps between scenes--some flashbacks, some flash-forwards, and some flash-I-don't-know-where. Berdoll tries for a grand epic story complete with elaborate purple prose. I can only assume that she was trying to imitate Austen's style, which I found rather long-winded in the first place. After a few hundred pages the prose became semi-invisible, miraculously. I was then able to concentrate on Berdoll's only writing strength: characters.
Truly, the sole reason I finished and actually like this book is characterization. Although the characters belong to Austen, Berdoll develops them further and vividly, especially secondary characters like Wickham and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Even with clumsy exposition-style internal monologue, by the last page I felt reluctant sympathy for all the characters, including Wickham (who is the main antagonist). And, of course, I adored Darcy and Elizabeth--the book is a traditional romance in that respect. I have, in fact, placed the sequel to the sequel (Darcy & Elizabeth) on the top of my to-read list. I guess it's too much to hope that Berdoll will have fixed her prose, though.